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Saturday, September 26, 2009

Secret Life of Bees Directors Cut


Mr. Gaston shot me a warning look."We got a guard on her at the hospital, and hes not letting anybody see her, so you go on back home. You understand?"
"Yes sir. I'm going home." Going home for supplies. I thought.
 "You do that," he said. "'cause if I hear you've been anywhere near that hospital, I'm calling your daddy again."

Of course, I then went to the hospital. Luckily for me, the guard was off flirting with the nurse long enough for me to get in, tell Rosaleen the plan, and sneak out with perfect timing.I heard him say,"I get off at six o'clock.". As soon as I left the hospital, Rosaleen shouted in a very good mockery of my voice, "Are you serious Rosaleen? You could have gotten killed!" The guard then immediately called Mr. Gaston and told him that I was in the hospital. He slammed the phone down on the receiver and ran towards our room only to find that It was only Rosaleen who made that noise. Luckily for me, I heard Mr. Gaston calling T-Ray. "Yes, she was caught in the hospital and deserves to be punished severely. He hung up and now, at 5:45, was my chance for freeing Rosaleen. Brother Gerald was parked right outside. He zoomed off towards my house.
"Why are we leaving?" He asked.
"I forgot something I needed to get to Rosaleen."
"Well please try to hurry. I'm late for a preaching."

The car came to a halt and I hurried and got my supplies. I got back in the car and got to the hospital one minute before six o'clock. Brother Gerald drove off into the distance. Unfortunately for me, T-Ray was still here. I had one minute until the guard left. I successfully sneaked past T-Ray and hid behind the Hospital waiting for the guard to leave. Sadly, another guard was coming to take his spot. I walked quietly in sink behind the incoming guard. I was surprised to see that the guard who was leaving was to busy flirting with the nurse that he did not notice me. The new guard came to an abrupt stop almost causing me to bump into him. "I'm in trouble now." I thought. He turned and told the guard to leave. "I'll leave when I want to!"He shouted back. They got into and argument and I sneaked into Rosaleen's room.

I waited until the new guard took his seat. I took my screwdriver and took the screws out of its hinges. On the count of three, Rosaleen and I kicked the door down and as planned, The guard was knocked out. The nurse left with the old guard and so we were home free. We darted off into the night. We were free.





2 comments:

  1. I like how you used descriptive words to describe the actions that happened it painted a picture.

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  2. I liked how you added dialoge to your deleted scene

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